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That is a rainy day,the rain came so suddenly that every one was wet except my family,because we took 2 umbrellas.Walking along the street,we saw an old woman with lots of shoes aound her standing in the rain helplessly ,all her hair was white.She couldn't leave,because the shoes were too heavy.No doubt,she was a shoe-seller.After a short time discussing,mom went to her with an umbrella in hand.She was so surprised to receive the "gift" that she didn't say any word. We three were under only one umbrella,crowded but warm.

Me? My mother is a helpful woman ,she loves help others.3 days ago my mother raise half of her money for poor students who are really need help.I am really ,proud what she did.